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You. Me. The Dancefloor. Now. by joeyh3 You. Me. The Dancefloor. Now. by joeyh3
Usually when a pony wants to dance with somepony else, they'll approach the other pony and ask for a dance. Rainbow Dash's methods are a bit different from that - she just tackles the pony and informs them that they're dancing.

Birthday present for the incredibly awesome =RainbowDashie.

Also, I'm trying a new style for this one. It was a bit trickier since there were no borders, but still a lot of fun regardless. What do ya'll think?

Big thanks to =Infinitoa and =civgod666 for their suggestions and critiques while making this. Also, big thanks to ~iOVERD for writing this tutorial, which came in handy when I was trying to figure out how to do the shading.
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:iconhotdawg12:
Okay, first things first, sexy. Now lets get to criticizing already!

Vision: Pretty good on this, could have been better. I can definitely see RD being so rough about this. The her dress isn't bad either, but Twilight's doesn't really look that great. I'll be honest that I don't think that Rarity would make that. There's also the lack of ponies. By the decorations and scenery, we are to assume that they are at a party, but the lack of ponies is something that really bothers me.

Originality: You didn't do too great in this. Twidash is a common shipping, so that brings it down a little. Another thing is that, while I do like it, in shipping the tackling to the ground in a romantic moment thing is used a lot While all this adds up, there's still originality in there. The dresses aren't used in the show, they're of your design, and that's good.

Technique: Okay in this one. Before I start off, the fourth star should be about one-fourth, not to be mean but it's a bit more accurate. One thing that really brings this up is their faces. They perfectly match what you know they would do. RD has that fire in her eyes, and Twilight doesn't know what's going on, instead of right off the bat having that seductive look on her. I like your art style, it works pretty well, but it unfortunately makes her wings look like plastic instead of feathers. Also, the cracks on the pillars are exactly the same for each pillar. I don't think the architects would do that on purpose, and it seems a bit too high of a coincidence.

Impact: Despite the flaws, this works really well. You really get a feel of the heated moment from this. There's not much else to say, other that bravo, this is really good.
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:iconspartasbrony:
SpartasBrony Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Surprise magic lover :)
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:iconwanderingpony:
WanderingPony Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This is probaly my second favorite ship :)
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:iconl-master:
L-MASTER Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
awesome
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:iconadanrocks:
AdanRocks Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
SEXY.
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:iconjms61899:
jms61899 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i cant say i ship these two ;c
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And I can't say I see why that was a necessary comment Shrug 
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:iconjms61899:
jms61899 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
me neither im just bored
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:icondormantflame:
DormantFlame Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Tonight, we dance the dance of love. *dons his flamenco outfit*
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha, what?
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:icondormantflame:
DormantFlame Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013
Don't mind me I'm silly :iconderpystompyplz:
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:iconsimonorj:
SimonOrJ Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The description! Haha!
Awesome! :D
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks :D
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:iconcrosspone:
Crosspone Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jeez Dashie
you're a bit pushy tonight
:eyes:
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She always is though :D
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:iconpinkraindrops03:
pinkraindrops03 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Even though I don't ship,this is really cute
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconlonelywolfcore:
lonelywolfcore Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist
wings! where the hell are the wings!?
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Attached to Rainbow's back.
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:iconuserup:
userup Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
You know what they say rraaawww
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
While Twilight's like "... meow?"

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:iconfloating-away:
Floating-Away Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013
Adorbs! I've missed seeing this pairing around!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TwiDash is my favorite pairing. I see it fairly often though. If you want, you can check out #TwiDash-FC and #TwiDash-Fans.
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:icondrewalexain:
DrewAlexain Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cute! I love it sooo much!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconthegrandarchitect:
thegrandarchitect Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I like Dash's Dress! Wonderbolt scheme I suppose?
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Could be. I mostly just made the dresses up as I went along though =P
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:iconthegrandarchitect:
thegrandarchitect Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice improvision!
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:iconhappygnomeland1:
Happygnomeland1 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Whoa whoa there! Now we're talking...
that's really saucy.
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:iconjenniinoue:
JenniInoue Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student General Artist
*giggle*

I ship it ♥
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So can Derpy :D
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:iconsmallwatermelon:
smallwatermelon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Dashie definitely came off too strong
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed, but that's just her style :D
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:iconvanillabeandandylion:
vanillabeandandylion Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
:icontwipartyplz:
:iconrdfacehoofplz:: This was much more romantic in my head...
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe, Twilight is so adorkably cute when she dances though!
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:iconmath-pompeu:
Math-Pompeu Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
Rainbow will be next prince instead Flash Sentry
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:iconmissserbianjelena:
MissSerbianJelena Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013
cute
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:iconstinkrat1234:
stinkrat1234 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student
love it the style is great, it seems like it could have actually happened.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconstinkrat1234:
stinkrat1234 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student
no problem
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:iconbaselover4:
baselover4 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WAT
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:iconinfinitoa:
Infinitoa Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pure romance, I love it <3
You have outdone yourself with this one. The new technique is astonishing and I can't wait to see where you take it in future images :3
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Romance certainly is nice. And thank you, I certainly plan on using this technique some more :D
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:iconcivwub:
Civwub Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Gotta admit, this turned out really well. I keep tripping on how Dash's wings came out. They look so real!
Great job!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D I gotta admit though I have somewhat mixed feelings on the wings - I like how the feathers look, but I'm not 100% happy with the joint where they connect to the body. I'm gonna have to play around with that some more in future pictures.
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Chimcharlover13 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Professional Writer
That's Dashie for you. Lesbian mare been talking other mares since the day she was born and telling them what to do. Good thing she only has eyes for Twi~ :heart:
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
TwiDash is best ship :D
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:iconchimcharlover13:
Chimcharlover13 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Professional Writer
Damn right it is! :heart:
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:iconarccahlon:
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sweet and sneaky way to get a kiss. I wonder if dash likes slow dancing or if she'd be the rave kind of dancer.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I can't imagine her being any better of a dancer than Twilight ;)
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:iconarccahlon:
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
knowing twilight she's study the dance for the last 3 weeks and scheduled it in. good thing dash is there to make her lighten up lol.
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