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BendyFlex <3

I mean Blossomforth <3
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Since I'm so keen to point out that most critiques are done incorrectly and with bias, let's see if I can set an example.
Vision, as always, gets high marks. You knew where you wanted to go, and we knew where you wanted to go. However, though the background looks great, it feels like it's lacking. Considering you put BendyFlex in a pose that looks to be directed (meaning not a "say cheese moment, but planned) I find myself surprised that you didn't blanket the background with more beach-related paraphernalia. I agree with you choosing her as your sole subject, but I'll say that a bird or two, a sand castle, or even just the crab that Rarity seems to be fighting now would have been a plus. So I give your props for doing it your way, always will buddy, but your vision could have used more.
Originality is key for me, you know this. You chose BendyFlex, who is not used as often as she should be (those freckles are to die for!) and you put her in a pose that is directed and not action oriented. Most volleyball pieces are always about the action of the game, and can be sexy, but are always the same. You have gone your own way. I can't give full stars, as she isn't your character, but putting her in a new environment and not sticking with what has been nets you a high sore anyways.
Technique is always tricky with art, at least in my eyes. I honestly prefer this way over the lineless versions, but technique isn't about opinion. Shading almost looks like an afterthought here and you put no shading on anything but her. The net would have made an interesting drop shadow and an alternating wet-sand mark along the beach would have been a nice touch. Certain aspects seem to have different rules in this piece, and that confuses me. So technique is going to take a hit here.
As for impact, this I see as opinion. And Blossomforth is adorable, what more do I need to say?
You know I'm honest, but fair. And since I did a critique, I call dibs on booping the belly button! *boop* Ha!
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mrPudding701 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Daaaw, she looks so cute!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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Epicfinn Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Student Artist
she look's cute
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BB-K Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my, you're sexy. :)
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TryHardBrony Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I remember you working on this from that Call. :D It came out quite nicely. :)
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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Fragnostic Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You need to make the nuzzle more pronounced... She looks a bit like a cat XD

Otherwise, excellent work!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. She's mostly facing the camera though, not a 3/4ths shot.
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:iconfragnostic:
Fragnostic Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hmm, still, there's something a bit off about it...
Oh well, keep up the good work!
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ShadowMark-182 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
I never thought anyone would ever put a swimsuit on a female pony. Nicely done.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconcivwub:
Civwub Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
D'awwww!~
She's so cute! I really want to boop the belly button ;)
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me too :D
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes! I do!
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Chengar-Qordath Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Nice to see some Blossomforth cuteness. Been too long since we got to see her.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Indeed, she's too awesome!
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RainbowDashie Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She'd win in any game=p
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perhaps. She'd definitely have my vote in a swimsuit competition!
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BADASSassin Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Me, not sporty, not flexible. Her, sporty, insanely flexible. I lose big time.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her cuteness would also be a distraction.
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:iconbadassassin:
BADASSassin Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013
And if she happened to stretch farther than her suit can, extra distraction.
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Fifth--Element Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013
Those eye Joey. Those eyes.
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Blossom's cute all over, and you know it!
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Fifth--Element Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Not as cute as Roseluck, and you know it!
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NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'd play, yay ^^
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! :D
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EROCKERTORRES Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student General Artist
oh my this is so cute!!
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:iconjoeyh3:
joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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Infinitoa Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You betcha' I'll play! No one could ever resist such a cute face! :iconlaplz:
Lovely work Honey Bunny <3 Heart-attacks everywhere, everywhere I tellz ya!
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joeyh3 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwww, thank you darling :D
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TryHardBrony Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
...Honey Bunny... *shakes head*
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